You scared the crap out of my cat lol :)
Aside from that I thought it was a good motiv but personally I didn't feel enough development to keep me hooked on that theme for as long as it was present, which since every aspect of the song was heavily dependant on the theme it was present the whole song.
I give it 7 but I really think you could revisit this song and break it down and use aspects of it to make a 10
thanks for the review!
well, I´m a little lazy to work again in a song that I already made, but I gonna take your comment heavly in the next songs!
in fact, I think it´s a problem in all my musics and i´ll try to work it out!
Really enjoyed it.
The only thing I think is that if you had used space in some strategic areas it would have added more punch and accented aspects of the structure/form for the listener a little bit more.
Other than that great work.
Loved the effect
I really like this piece. You took a theme and you layered it with variations from that theme and when they all came together it really built some tension (greatly due to you use of what sounded like tremolo strings).
I really liked at 2:02 where that haunting melody comes in because it prepared the listener for the space that came after which the signaled the start of the B section. The B section then built back up in tension, the same way the A section did, and then ultimatly comes to the resolution of the song.
The resolution is great because while it concludes the song it does not resolve the built up tension of the piece which leaves the listener in the same state a few seconds after hearing the piece as they were a few seconds into the piece, tense and on edge, and since I feel this was the desired effect I say bravo.
"while it concludes the song it does not resolve the built up tension of the piece which leaves the listener in the same state a few seconds after hearing the piece as they were a few seconds into the piece" -- you have no idea how glad I am you felt this way.
Thank you so much for your in-depth review and score, it is so very much appreciated. And yeah, the tremelo strings were the key to the piece.
I like the real explosion of sound at 17 secs, I feel it came in just at the right time to catch the ear.
It doesn't move around to much from there and not much "development" but that is ok because the lack of those things didn't detract from the work for me.
It really picks up in the middle and even in the end you can still hear an "echo" of the energy that came from the middle.
Begining is very creepy and original. Haven't really heard anything like that before.
thanks mister :)
Song on Rhythm Rockets
I felt this is the #1 song on Rhythm rockets. I played through the game with this song 3 times.
Solid song man!
Im glad you feel that way! I was glad that he wanted to use my song on his game too!! Thanks for listening and playing!!
If I were a flash designer I would put this in a game. It also loops it self pretty perfectly, maybe only off by a couple tenths of a secound.
this song is in platform racing 3 =]
I disagree with other review
I saw one person said it was "cluttered." I humbly disagree with that. I think it is one of the best dance songs I have heard from this site.
I really hope someone uses it in a flash, it would be great for one of those fast paced stick games.
I think it is one of those songs that truely deserves a 5 and a 10 :)
Well thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you appreciate my work!
its like a mix of a sporting event, an anime(as said below) and a dance party track lol.
I like the beat and you mixed it up enough to keep my interest the whole way through.
It is a little out of my genre though, so sorry if I can't go farther than I like it lol :)
Haha thanks. It was definitely an odd mix of genres (if you can consider sporting event a genre). Appreciate the comment!
The best song on the 30 new list.
You should listen to composers like Christopher Tin (civilization 4 composer). This song reminded me of Baba Yetu. It is quite a bit different but I felt it had the same power and energy.
Thank you for your kind words, and I actually feel that my previous work resembles Civ 4 more than this one after hearing a few of the tracks - but thank you for your comments : )
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